You have chosen interesting videos but your analysis is too brief. You need to expand, with examples, on use of camera, editing and mise en scene. Use stills to illustrate. Explain in detail how the artist is represented- star quality, sexuality, etc. You are quite clear on what you could use in your own video, but make more specific reference to which parts of the case studies these refer to. Add a 3rd case study once you've made these improvements. Vanessa
You have chosen interesting videos but your analysis is too brief. You need to expand, with examples, on use of camera, editing and mise en scene. Use stills to illustrate. Explain in detail how the artist is represented- star quality, sexuality, etc. You are quite clear on what you could use in your own video, but make more specific reference to which parts of the case studies these refer to. Add a 3rd case study once you've made these improvements. Vanessa
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